Khalid, I haven't read any of the comments and I have just looked at the 2 flyers and read your original post.
I personally don't like either and think they both look amateur - who designed them for you, or are they ones you done yourself ? whoever done them they look very amateurish - no offence meant at all.
I used to attempt my own designs when I was doing some promotional work on my early websites, and when I realised I wasn't very good at it, I took the plunge and got someone to do it for me. Coincidently when sorting my office out last week to hide some of the kids christmas presents, I found some old flyers I had designed myself in a folder alongside the flyers I had designed professionally - I literally laughed and was shocked at how poor my ones were looking back at them.
If you want to appear like a very professional operation, then your flyers need to look as good as possible, as they are a reflection of your business and company and also the first impression people will get of you, and making that small extra cost will increase your conversion and make you more money in the long run anyway.
Another good thing about using a real designer, is they will have experience of doing this type of thing before, and will also have their own ideas of what will work best - afterall they are a designer by trade.
I just went through my old emails and
http://www.rfkprintsolutions.co.uk done some mini flyers for me before for one of my main sites and the design work and overall service was awesome.
I had 5000 double sided full colour mini flyers done for around £130 inc design and delivery - they are business card size and superb quality in thickness and finish. I just looked and they are now £85 for the cards and £25 for a professional design done also, so only £110 in total - bargain ! If you want the email of the guy there who done mine, ping me on MSN
You know how much I believe in this idea of yours from our numerous MSN chats over the last few months. I also know exactly how hard you work at the idea and how much you are determined to make it succeed, hence why I am giving you advice based on my own real experience.
If you are on a really tight budget and trying to save money by doing it yourself, I don't mind paying the design cost for you, as you are doing very well with this idea and are in it for the long haul, and I don't want you to get demotivated because the flyers haven't worked JUST because the design looked amateurish.
Keep doing what your doing mate - you will get there