Wanted: Website Review Live Roulette

[dave9713]

Hey guys,

Hoping to get some views on my website live roulette.

Any ideas on what I could do to improve this? Especially from a conversion perspective.

Thanks,

Dave

 

[FutureDomain]

Great design, the layout is great.

I would put a footer in with copyright notice and secondary text links to the site pages, I am a big fan of using some text ads for instant income as well as sign up conversions.

Kind Regards
Leon

 

[dave9713]

Thanks for the tips - I will certainly look at adding a footer to the site.

Thanks,
Dave

 

[Reg Wharf]

Hi Dave,

Sorry to be an old stickler but the content is full of grammatical errors.

Line 1-you've written "is so" instead of "if so"
Line 2-independent not independant
Line 3-you've written "your"-should be "you're"
Line 4-"can can help" instead of "can help"

And I think sign up bonus should be sign-up bonus (I think).

As I say, sorry to be picky but nothing makes me hit the back button quicker
than duff spelling.

Other than that, the site looks nice.

Cheers,

Mark

 

[dave9713]

Hi guys,

Thanks for the in depth reviews, I am glad I posted this!

@DomainAngel - Your right, especially with the h1 - it's not really a call to action is it! I will take some time tomorrow to mill through your suggestions and get some stuff done. Thanks a lot for the in depth review, no matter how critical

I was thinking about moving out to other live games - and recently brought livecasinos.co.uk (not developed) to do that with. I will make sure to post here for a review once done.

@Reg Wharf - Thanks for the corrections, in the heat of throwing something up it seems I made some mistakes. All for the greater good!

Thanks again,
Dave